高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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I am a football lover, Play football is my best hobby. A accidental opportunity let me like football. I pinked up a football on my way home, then playing it with my friends, since then i am deeply in love with football. i am usually training and competion with my classmate. Bei is my favorite football star, becoming a occupation football player is my greatest desire