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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Be Careful With Our Money In Our Daily Life Most of us are careful with our money in our daily life. But someone think it is not a smart cunsume behavior. I'm not agree the opinion. I think we should be careful with our money. Firstly, our money is earned by our parents who are so hard to makink it, so we should be careful with our money in our daily life. As we all know, the price of the materials raised these years, money has not worth its value. Years ago, one dollar can buy many things, but now one dollar just can buy the value of the things which worth half of a dollar. So, as a student who are completely consumers we should be careful with our money. Secondly, our money should spent on the aspects that need to cost it. As a student, we should spent our money in buying books but not buying other special things. Don't waste it. So I think we should be careful with our money in our daily life.
