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Dear George, very glad to receive your letter.i am happy to know that you want to live in household hotel of our hometown. there are double rooms and single room, double rooms is 30 yuan every day and single room is 20 yuan every day, meals is 20 yuan for every one, you could have lunch with the host, you can choose to order dishes or make it yourself. if you have time you