2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。

Recently there comes a survey about the education pays in high earning and lower unemployment rent.According to the dates they have collected,it shows that the higher education you have,the more wage you have,especially when you are beyond the doctor degree. Based the date,we could find that the higher degree it is, the less people can get it,as there are 9.4%having a high school degree ,6.8%in associate degree and less than3%in both professional degree and doctor degree. It's said that over 14% people having less than high school diploma who just make $451 weekly while those,at 9.4%, who got a high school diploma may get more $200 over them.some of them who may attend the colleges but gain no degree would probable raise $719 weekly,while those mainly get only $50 over than with a associate degree. A bachelor's degree can be helpful to you,if you want to earn more salary,because you could gain more than $1000 a week with a bachelor's degree,which is more than twice to those with no high school diploma.However,when it comes to the much higher degree,such as the professional degree ,2.4%,and doctor degree,2.5%,the growth changed.In the survey,it shows a strange phenomenon that a person having a professional degree get more paying than the one with a doctor degree,which is $1665,$1oo higher.But there are still an increase paying between those with a master degree and the other with a higher degree. At last,in the survey ,we can easily come to a conclusion that the high degree you have,the more paying you get.