高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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Home Town In the past, My home is surrounded by many green trees,Fish always have fun in the clean water.although the environment was very nice ,but the houses were shabby and the streets were narrow.People there were conscientious but poverty ; several decades passed, it fulls of many tall buildings 、factories 、and shops.Cars are running over the streets.With the pollution of environment by the developing of industry , trees and fish is vanishing.So the first important task is to take care of the pollution ,it's emergency and necessary . I hope my home town being more and more beautiful and humanity.