2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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internet shopping is being fashion now.because it have many benifits.on below i will tell you some reason about internet shopping. first. more people have no time shopping because it is very busy so that must be interent.sceond.internet shopping no expensive.it is a big reason.it have many shortage but have many bad.example.money is very dangerous. i will give you advice about internet shopping.you can buy some little thing.but i suggest you do not buy expensive thing.this is my suggestion.thank you.