2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；适当增加学术词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

My opinion on certificate craze As far as we realized,it is activily presenting the phenomenon that quiet a few persons are paying a great deal of attention to the certificate,including English test and Computer test.Almost anywhere there will be left their steps and hand.They expend a lot for certificate. Nevertheless,the purpose of crazing about the certificate is clearly different.The most general reason is that they are required to have the certificate.Without the certificate,they will not have a better job.Thereroe,they are eagerly intending to get the certificate. But rather persons who are really feeling like getting the certificate is enough to learn further acknowledge.Instead of holding a better job,they only want to learn the acedmic acknowledge and get more experience.They just enjoy fun in learing. In my view of my eyes,certificate is a advantage circs.However ,one coin has two sides.Thus,we are supposed to treat it in a correct way.It is sure that getting a better job need certificate nowdays.But only having a certificate can't certify that you are good at this work.Aside way,our capable is not actual with the certificate.So,we suggest that we ought to keep control of it.Only in your own way we can prove us more dierctly. In a word,certificate craze is not a clever decision.