一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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14 th march 2014 Sunday is a fine day , I have eated the breakfast ,I halp my mom cleaning the room ,I stand the homework , The homework is very interesting .have lunch . and my friend Li togerther play te pipang and watch TV , we are very happy ,What is a busy day