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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；全文结构较为严谨。
On Excessive Packaging Along with the advanced of society,more and more controversial have been brought to our attention,one of which is that goods' excessive packaging. Why have there been so many excessive packaging, maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.To begin with,the goods' excessive packaging is appeal to the person, which is creative and amazing. In addition, it can take more and more benefits and money,which is driving the thrive of economy. Last but not least, most of the companies exist competition in business so that they have to do the most packaging. After a careful consideration for my part, I think the phenomenon of excessive packaging should reduce among the companies due to it's not fair to people, and people should realize the truth.I suggest the government should take some measures to control this phenomenon. Nonetheless the proper packaging for goods is much better for the society and people.
