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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。
Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. what are the causes and solutions? As we know, we live in the 21st century,whic is a high speed of lfitstyle. That means that many people will be under a lot of pressure in daily life. What is the reason of this issue? First, the air pollution should act as the role of vital factors. Humen being may suffer different kinds of health problems, such as a headace,a backace, a bad cough, a soae throast and so on. People must do a lot of woking in order to earning money, in other words, they will under lots of pressure. In order to solve the problem, we should develop the green technology and grow more trees in the cities, exhance the sence of health, build more sport facilities. We should know how to take a relax during the heavy task in daily life. We'll keep a healthy diet and an active lifestlye,if we want to keep healthy.
