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Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling As we know,a lot of students do not like to spelling in learn Egelish. why does this happen? First,people think that it is not inportant to spelling.becuse we just know what it means,do we can have a gress. secoudly,it is very boring to spelling for us. And some students who are work hard are bad at spelling ,ever thay were remmenber words all the day.So that is to say,spelling also is very defficult for us.The most inportance thing is that teacher do not make eyes on spelling ,they only care for how to improve gress of steadents. Learning a largagare not olny do we remmenber their ruler,but also we can spell them. So we should work hard in spelling.we can find some intersiting way to learn worlds, and we mast have a good feeling with eglish.An old to say