Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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The table tells us that the one who has the higher education would have more chance to high earing jobs,and less possiable being unemployments. From the table we can clearly see that the unemployment rate is 14.1% in persons having less than high school diploma,which is 11.6% higher than persons having the doctoral degree,but they earn just 451 dollers every mouth which is no more than 1/3 the doctors earning.So we can summry that how improtent the study is!The socity need more professional people to creat more society wealth and to push the whole society going ahead. As college students,we are supposed to know it.The more improtant is we need to try our best to study,so that we can have a more successful future.