题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Trust is significant for human to keep a good relationship.On maintaining trust can make us commnicate easily with others. Trust is best tool which can make us successful what you are doing.When you are a merchant,if you are person who is trusted,and ,more and more people will be willing to be you cooperator.And if you are a student,learning trust others ,you can get more friendship. But,as a person,if you aren't trusted by anyone.Nothing what you can do.NO people want to cooperate with you.And no one is willing to work or study with you.Your life is always longly. So,trust other is vritul,and trusted by others is also important.On maintaining trust play a role which is indispensible among human.