2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(17):Life in the future

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Humans life will be longer in the future because of the develop of medical teachnology. About aleast 50% percent persons will aliving untill 120 years-old. And thanks to the birth of an amount of new energy, the the problem of pollution were under controled. There are lots of changes in people's daliy life. For example, you couldn't do any houseworks, because the robot will help you. The chair will change it's color along with your clothe's . You needn't make your cellphone in your pocket, instead,you can wear it on your hands, when you call somebody you can see he or she immediately. There is an a mazing thing that you can get into the space through by special elevator! Our life will be more and more wonderful in the future, we can save some money, some time, some strength and so on. In a word, the world will be amzing!