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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46105
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少;全文结构较为严谨。

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The table tells us that the one who has the higher education would have more chance to high earing jobs,and less impossible being employments. From the table we can clearly see that the unemployment rate is 14.1% in persons having less than high school diploma,which is 11.6% higher than persons having the doctoral degree,but they earn just 451 dollars every mouth which is no more than 1/3 the doctors earning.So we can summary that how important the study is!The society needs more professional people to create more society wealth and to push the whole society going ahead. As college students,we are supposed to know it.What more important is that we need to try our best to study,so that we can have a more successful future.

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