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The life of people will be longer in the future because of the development of medical technology. About at least 50% percent persons will live until 120 years-old. And thanks to the birth of some new energy, the problem of pollution was under controlled. There are lots of changes in people's daily life. For example, you don't have to do house works, because the robot will help you. The color of the chair will change with the color of your dress. You needn't make your cellphone in your pocket, instead,you can wear it on your hands, when you call somebody you can see he or she immediately. There is an amazing thing that you can get into the space through by special elevator! Our life will be more and more wonderful in the future, we can save some money, some time, some strength and so on. In a word, the world will be amazing!