4. 文具方面。
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;请注意分段。
Dear classmates, Chairman Hu called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year. As a student, I think wo should do it from ourselves. First of more, we should reduce the money of snacks. The snacks not only bad for our bodies but also waste money, it is not scientific. Scond, in the costumes, we shouldn't spend too much money to buy clothes that it's unnecessary, and buy too much makeup. Third, wo should reduce some energy, such as water and eletricity, energy is important for our life. The last but not least, some things that we use in everyday, pens and papers, we could use papers with it's double sides.