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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(18):节约型社会

发布时间:2014-02-19 17:24浏览次数:754
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目前我们国家在建设节约型社会,请你根据自己的实际生活情况,向全校同学发出倡议。内容从下面几个方面着手,开头已给出,不计入总词数。词数100左右。
1. 吃零食方面;
2. 服装打扮方面;
3. 节约用水、电方面;

4. 文具方面。


Dear classmates,
Chairman Hu called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year. As a student, I think 
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;请注意分段。

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Dear classmates, Chairman Hu called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year. As a student, I think wo should do it from ourselves. First of more, we should reduce the money of snacks. The snacks not only bad for our bodies but also waste money, it is not scientific. Scond, in the costumes, we shouldn't spend too much money to buy clothes that it's unnecessary, and buy too much makeup. Third, wo should reduce some energy, such as water and eletricity, energy is important for our life. The last but not least, some things that we use in everyday, pens and papers, we could use papers with it's double sides.

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