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作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；可适当增加从句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
In my opinion,I am willing to join good-buy deal which can save more money and sometime give me a surprise not only at its quality but also at its beauty.When buying,we must finger out what we want and whether to buy it at that time immediately.What's more,buy one you love even though it would be in a higher price,and do not persuade anyone when he or she hesitate to buy this thing. Last year,my roommates and I have spent more than 3000yuan just in one day at group-buy deal.As it was a special day in China,which named of the single day,we purchased online and was deeply surprised by the lowest price of our favorite brand and goods.Puzzled by the price,we bought all thing we are fond of without any high thinking.And when all these things came,we finally got that we were not really need them at that time.As a result,we had an impressed lesson and decided not to cheat by these holiday promotion again.But I think the most important thing we should think about twice before having a purchase is that whether we need it right now and whether we will use it for a long time as well as whether we can wait for another time to buy another.If we totally do that,we won't be cheated by all these advertises any more. There are one more example to support my opinion above.Once upon a time,my friend and I were eager to buy a MP3 and we eventually found a beautiful one with good quality but in a higher price.As I didn't get enough money to buy it,I gave it away but my friend persuaded me to have another bargain with a lower price I can accept.I hesitated and wondered again and again.In the end,I decided to buy this one in a lower price.However,my MP3 was thrown away by me shortly after as it wasn't the one I truly want.I were sad since I wasted money rather than save it.So since that I won't buy anything I don't like in fact and I would like to think alone when it comes to a choice to whether to buy or not. From what have been put up above,we can easily come to a conclusion that think twice before buying is a better way to save money.As a college student,we must learn well in how to arrange our money to have the foundation of manage finances in the future.We can buy bargain and we also can collect all kinds of coupons which can be shared with friends who really need it.There must be thousands of way to save money as long as we try.
