2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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When it comes to the topic "Computer and Man",Every people has their own opinon .As the saying goes" coins have two sides",computer make it convenient for us to search information,geting in touch with each other.We find it's easy to study with the help of compter. Also ,nowadays ,many people are lost in the computer oeance.Some people were absorded in playing computer games ,chating with each other on studying or working time,cheating though computer.It let many people suspect the safety of computer.We can see today most of the cheating accident taking part in computer.Admitted,computer takes us benefits,what we can do is use it in a proper way. So ,when computer comes to us,we should make sure that it is used in the right way,we can act as a master of computer.