2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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When it comes to the topic "Computer and Man",Every person has their own opinion.As the saying goes" coins have two sides",computer makes it convenient for us to search information,getting in touch with each other.We find it's easy to study with the help of compter. Also,nowadays,many people are lost in the computer seance.Some people were absorbed in playing computer games,chating with each other on studying or working time,cheating with computer.It let many people suspect that wherether it is safe useing computer.We can see today most of the cheating taking part in computer.Admitted,computer takes us benefits,what we can do is use it in a proper way. So,when computer comes to us,we should make sure that it is used in the right way,we can act as a master of computer.