安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山(the Yellow Mountain )。
(1)位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
(2)乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。
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Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui.It's one of the most famous tourist attctions.Every year a number of tourists at home and abroad go to Mount Huang.It takes 3 hours to go there by bus.You can also take the train or take the plane.The scenery on Mout Huang is so beautiful that many people lose theirselves in it.In the moring,if you climb the mountain,you may be lucky enough to watch the sunrise.And there are wondrous pines,uinque rocks and the sea of clouds. Hope you have a wonderful time.