2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；请作者增加词汇丰富度，希望作者能够较为熟练的使用学术词汇；请注意分段。

At present,it has been a common phenomenon that children depend on their parents everything,including making the beds and choosing universities or majors for their children.Therefore,it is urgent that parents should help children to be independent. Then how to help children to be independent for parents?Some strong actions should be adopted to resolve this problem.First of all,parents should raise children's awareness and passion of the independent,which is the key to the success of this campaign.What's more,the habit of independent for children should also be advocated and promoted,for example,substituting children for parents to choose universities or majors,going to school by thenselves instead of depending parents around of you and so on.It is certain that if parents have enough patience to help children to be independent,it could change the phenomenon that that children depend on their parents everything.