2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次较为清晰；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。

Along with the progress of humanbeings,today,the electronics is more and more developed,such as computers. Whenever i sit in the front of the computer,i could forget everythin that make me sad. There are a wide range of contents in it,like film,music,photo,news and so on.How can't we like it? The computers are so helpful and convenient that people can't lose it anymore.At present,interpersonal relationship is getting more stranger,even including our parents and children.What if there is no computers i have been thinking.We need to try our best to change the situations.Let's do it!