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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请注意分段。
To great extent, many human activities do harm to the earth. It is after the environment has been polluted heavily that people realized it. I don't agree with the opnion, some people said, that it is too late to do anything about the environmental problem. As long as we can do, even a little thing, to improve this situation, we shouldn't give up.Such as, we can reject to waste, to pull the rubbish anywhere, to use the plastic bags, etc. Meantime, the banks can stop give loans to the business which infect the environment. And all measures should be adopted in time.
