小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,he's name is Tom.We learned 3 years ago.He is my best friend. He likes swimming,playing basketball. And he is a good pupil.He's good at maths,and I'm good at Chinese.We often learn each other.I have a dream ,we go to the same middle school one day.Wish our friendship forever.