2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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It is important for us to have a strong will, because it is the key to succeed. If you without a strong will, you may haven't enough encourage to do anything,and it will fail. But if you have a strong will, you will dare to do everything. People who have a strong will can accomplish great missions. As a student, I should insist on studying hard, if not I will become a useless person in the future.