小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. He's name is wangjun, he look like every hamsome, with a big smile, sunshine, and easygoing. I like he very much, he is friendly with me, in my life, he help me often, I am very approciate to him. Wangjun likes play basketball very much. He is going to play basketball on the playground every Friday with classmates. Whenever he plays basketball, there must be have an amount of girls around the palyground. He is the centre of girls' domitory. Not only girls but also boys, all like to be a friend with him. This is my god friend.