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I have a good friend. He's name is Wang Jun, he looks like every hansome, with a big smile, sunshine, and easygoing. I like he very much, he is friendly with me. In my life, he help s me often, I am very approciate to him. Wangjun likes play basketball very much. He is going to play basketball on the playground every Friday with classmates. Whenever he plays basketball, there are have an amount of girls around the playground. He is the centre of girls' dormitory. Not only girls but also boys, all like to be a friend with him. This is my god friend.