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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36946
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;文中词汇丰富度不足,拼写检查也要重视;请注意分段。

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I have a good friend. He's name is Wang Jun, he looks like every hansome, with a big smile, sunshine, and easygoing. I like he very much, he is friendly with me. In my life, he help s me often, I am very approciate to him. Wangjun likes play basketball very much. He is going to play basketball on the playground every Friday with classmates. Whenever he plays basketball, there are have an amount of girls around the playground. He is the centre of girls' dormitory. Not only girls but also boys, all like to be a friend with him. This is my god friend.

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