2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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with the development of tecnology, it is more important that computer is a necessory thing our normal life.we can do what we want on internet, for example , we can surf the internet and contact with friends ,and shopping.it is so important as if we can't live without it we are exciated with the convenent , by the computer,while forget what disadvantages are disturb our life. we would rather paly games than talking our happiness with familys. neverless ,we would mix work time and relax time. and decrase our effect time. there are always two sides of one thing. so we should take the advantages and throw away some bad things , making a good life about computer and ourselves.we would have a nice life.