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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了。
The graph shows that ,the higher education degree ,the less unemployment rate . Someone may think that one should get a higher degree to avoid being employed But I don't think so Because ,firstly ,if one has learned useful knowledge in the academy and then gets a degree ,he or she will be much easier to succeed in the interview .Secondly,if one hasn't learned any knowledge ,although he or she gets a degree ,it's much harder to be employed. So I think that unemployment rate does not surely depend on getting a degree or not but depends on how much knowledge and practical skills one has
