Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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The graph shows that,the higher education degree,the less unemployment rate . Someone may think that one should get a higher degree to avoid being unemployed But I don't think so Because,firstly,if one has absorbed useful knowledge in the colledge and then gets a degree,he or she will be much easier to succeed in the interview .Secondly,if one hasn't aquired any knowledge ,although he or she gets a degree,it's much harder to be employed. So I think that unemployment rate does not surely depend on getting a degree but depends on how much knowledge and the practical skills one has