2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累。

The graph shows that,the higher education degree,the lower unemployment rate. Someone may think that one should get a higher degree to avoid being unemployed But I don't think so Because,firstly,if one has useful knowledge in the college and then gets a degree,he or she will be much easier to succeed in the interview.Secondly,if one hasn't acquired any knowledge,although he or she gets a degree,it's much harder to be employed. So I think that unemployment rate does not surely depend on getting a degree or not but depends on how much knowledge and the learning skills one has