2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；句式灵活多变，但文中句子错误偏多了；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错。

The graph shows that,the higher education degree,the lower unemployment rate. Someone may think that one should get a higher degree to avoid being unemployed But I don't think so Because,firstly,if one has good achievement in the college and then gets a degree,he or she will be much easier to succeed in the interview.Secondly,if one hasn't acquired any knowledge,although he or she gets a degree,it's much harder to be employed. So I think that unemployment rate does not depend on getting a degree or not but depends on the achievement acquired in the college