Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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The graph shows that,the higher education degree,the lower unemployment rate. Someone may think that one should get a higher degree to avoid being unemployed But I don't think so Because,firstly,if one has good achievement and then gets a degree,he or she will be much easier to succeed in the interview.Secondly,if one hasn't acquired any knowledge,although he or she gets a degree,it's much harder to be employed. So I think that unemployment rate does not depend on getting a degree but depends on the achievement acquired in the college So I think if one wants to be employed he or she should work hard in the school.