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2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:45浏览次数:9981
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题目 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
说明 Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒。

用户练习作文:

As tourism is a booming business in China,there rouse many debate about whether tourism should bring harm to the environment.Through my observation and investigation,I think it would not bring any troubles to the local environment with the help and protection of government. Firstly,as there are some many places of interest in China,we should not only encourage the development of tourism but also make some effect to promote its development so as to show our brilliant culture and natural legacy to people all over the world.What's more,we would also attract more foreigners to get there to facilitate the financial communications to improve the international statue of country.As a result,cultural soft power as well as the economy could get some promotion in this way. Thirdly,even if some pollution would be caused,we were to spare no effect to make some measures to help and protect.According some news recently,it's said that the government has already had plans to protect the environment and ameliorate the structure of the tourism as well.To our enjoyment,some volunteering organisation have set up to support those plans in these days and they have also made a great change at all. As the coins have two side,we ought not to ignore the potential dangers in environment,but we would not stop the tourism development.

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