2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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There is no denying the fact of the quality of life in large cities has become the utmost concern among people in recent days. As to me, I think there are a lot of reasons to cause this situation. It includes environmental pollution, traffic jam, health problems and working pressure and so on. Then I will talk about these problems as following. First of all, I think how can we solve the problems the most effective. The answer just is to find out the reasons for the problems. So, on the surface, in large cities the quality of life is decreasing because the environmental pollution is gradually serious, the time of traffic jam is increasing and so on. But in fact, the result of these problems is overpopulation in large cities. Why? It is in large cities that the best national resources are concentrated. Next, the issue`s core is discovered. And, the trouble can be solved very well. The answer is decentration, let national resources disperse to other cities, sometimes let these resources are used more efficient. And to foster some cities become some professional center. For example, Detroit is the center of the automobile in America, and NewYork is the financial center, Washington is the religious and cultural center. In summarize, to improve the quality of life is big issue. And need to we carefully thought about the most efficient method. I believe our future will be more harmonious.