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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17582
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;全文结构较为严谨;采用了一些简单的从句。

用户练习作文:

I agree with the statement that snap judgments can never be trusted . Snap judgments are equal to unconscious judgments .It's always has no concrete persuasion at all.Thus can result to a bad influence for such an important matter .So,we should never trust it . For instance,in ancient China,which is 2000years ago in war period .Qin kingdom possessed a large area from other countries like Zhao kingdom which was one of the powerful country in that period . When Qin came to attack Zhao ,the king of the Zhao distribute his land to Qin without hesitate and to chase for peace .He just think that Qin was aimed to attain land ,not to swallow the whole country. But ,the snap judgment proposal by the king of the Zhao was not being trusted . And then ,the Qin combined all of the six countries and killed the kings . So, snap judgements can never be trusted ,and we should think twice before we make a decision.

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