2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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At present,it has been a common phenomenon that everything children depend on their parents,including making the beds and choosing universities for their children.Therefore,it is urgent that parents should help children to be independent. Then parents how to help children to be independent?Some strong actions should be adopted to resolve this problem.First of all,parents should raise children's awareness and passion of the independent,which is the key to the success of this campaign.What's more,the habit of independent should also be advocated and promoted,for example,substituting children for parents to choose universities or majors,going to school by themselves instead of depending on parents around of you and so on.It is certain that if parents have enough patience to help children to be independent,it could change the phenomenon that that children depend on their parents everything.