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句式变化多样;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文中词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
nowadays, we become more careful with our purchasing and try our best to save more money. About this issue, most people think that this is helpful for us becoming a smart consumer, as for me, i can not agree more on this opinion. Firstly, there is a case in this point is that more and more people choose group-buy, because this way will save their money and they can get their propriate products when compare more. secondly, with the development of Internet, we can learn more and save more time and money to make a decision when purchasing. last but not the less important, with the globalization expanding, we must be a smart consumer to keep up with the economy developme. it shows that, above has list, consumer consider more and try their best to make a purchase decision.