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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33585
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

句式变化多样;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文中词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

nowadays, we become more careful with our purchasing and try our best to save more money. About this issue, most people think that this is helpful for us becoming a smart consumer, as for me, i can not agree more on this opinion. Firstly, there is a case in this point is that more and more people choose group-buy, because this way will save their money and they can get their propriate products when compare more. secondly, with the development of Internet, we can learn more and save more time and money to make a decision when purchasing. last but not the less important, with the globalization expanding, we must be a smart consumer to keep up with the economy developme. it shows that, above has list, consumer consider more and try their best to make a purchase decision.

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