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Along with the development of economy, people has higher and higher requirement of the packkaging of goods, so some goods have beautiful packaging. Because of the beautiful packaging, more and more people like to buy goods, din't care how the goods' really quality and how money they spent. In fact, most goods weren't worth their high price. But shopekeepers in order to make goods have a high price them packaging beautifully, so that they can earn lots pf money. For this kind of phenomenon, I think it is a waste of behavior. A good thing isn't depend on it's packaging but in it's true value. If a good only value of 30 yuan,but you want to sell for 100 dollars, so you on excessive packaging it's not wise.Your custumes will not buy anything in your store again, you will lose more money.So, I advise that packaging properly is necessary, it can make your goods look beautiful, but if on excessive packaging is a wrong way.