2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Along with the development of economy, people have higher and higher requirement of the packaging of goods, so some goods have beautiful packaging. Because of the beautiful packaging, more and more people like to buy goods, didn't care how the goods' really quality and how money they spent. In fact, most goods weren't worth their high price. But shopkeepers in order to make goods have a high price them packaging beautifully, so that they can earn lots pf money. For this kind of phenomenon, I think it is a waste of behavior. A good thing isn't depend on packaging but in its true value. If a thing only value of 30 yuan,but you want to sell for 100 dollars, so you on excessive packaging it's not wise.Your costumes will not buy anything in your store again, then you will lose more money.So, I think that packaging properly is necessary, it can make your goods look beautiful, but if on excessive packaging is a wrong way.