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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。
My idea of a university arts festival When asked about what the arts festival is,many people believe that it is just a form to show our results of learning arts.But other people regard that it is an important process to improve our arts learning.However,I view quite differently:arts festival in university gives us an oppotunity to show our inspiration.And it also give us a chance to learn others' ideas.Moreover,we can gain our adoration on arts. Then here comes my idea.First of all,we can invite some students no matter which grade they are，who have the inspiration and some results on arts.Then let them show their results.And the more the students invited,the more arts we will see.Secondly,we could classify the arts into different types.For example,the singing section,writing section,model section and so on. In all,we should attend this art festival with a respected heart.
