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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1948
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

as known it is, the phonemenon of waste is very common thing on campus. it do not limit in food, but ranging from study equipment to life resource. as the time going, it become more serious than ever before. it seems that students do not care about the resours which actually is very coal factor to keep human beings living better. however, it is reported that waste is not simple problem as we think in mind. first of all , it will cause bad habit that do not cherish any valuable things.

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