2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Recently,the phenoment of excessive packaging has aroused public attention,is being more and more popular. There are various reason may account for it. One the one hand,with the development of peoples living stander,people have more money than ever before.The goods on excessive packaging can show how wealthy they are.On the other hand,the person who recieved the goods on excessive package hold the view that the more excessive the goods are,the more important they are. As far as i am concerned,its a waste of time and money to do so.It is essential to change peoples minds on this problem.Only in this way,can we live in harmony with nature.