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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6297
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足。

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As the saying goes maintaining trust needs a long time, maybe a week, or a mouth even a couple of years, but destroying trust just needs a sharp moment. I prefer believe this issue to make no sense of trust crisis. When I was in senior high school, one of my roommates was the most friendly person and had almost the most much friends in our class, while I just had at most six friends, as there were over 50 person in our class. I was inspired and also tried to make friends with many others who I even never told to. Since the day that I decided to be one like my roommate,I had tried to be friendly and done everything that I can to do a favor when they did need my help. However, once I didn't obey my promise to one of my friends because of my carelessness, he just broke the friendship with me, which really let me down. Even though I ever experienced this kind of sorrow of losing trust, I am still inclined to keep on maintaining trust, for I believe we each one need at least a person to tell you secrets and share your beloved with. On maintaining trust can make our life colorful and wonderful.

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