4. 文具方面。
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。
Dear classmates, Chairman Hu called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year. As a student, I think we should have some advice. Nowaday,our country had being contributed that a saving country ,so wo should try to do sth.I hope to be opportunity. First,we should eat less foods,and dress up needn‘t to very beautiful. second,we should saving use to water