小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my freind names candy she is my classmate she has a long black hair and a pair pf big eyes we always help each other on study she loves drawing so do I we usually go to park to draw pictures at weekends after that she will come to my home to have dinner with my parents my parents loves her as also