2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Now people feel that the education is much more important even they find that the education pays are much higher as well .More and more people want better education. The Current population survey from Labor statistics in 2011 show :the everage of weely earning in 2011 is $797 and the everage of unemployment in 2011 is 7.6% ,that is totally good. There are 2 points which need note: 1.The higher education spends many more pays but its earnings are also much higher;2.Another thing is that the employment rates of the high education are lower