2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

Recent years has witnessed a mounting number of people shopping online,which no consensus has been reached. Shopping online not only does good to us but also causes many problem which should concern us.On the one hand,it bring us convenience because we can get goods but needn't go out,and we can get lots of information of various kinds of goods online and choose the most suitable goods.On the other hand,we can't see the real goods before we buy it and it's hard to us to tell the real information from the fake,which give rise to a result that we may get unsatisfied goods. From what has conclusion above,we can shop online but we should attention to the online-goods' credibility by concerning the customers comments or consulting others and so on.