托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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I agree with the following statement that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.With the development of the society, rural area are better than it before.Living in a rural area are as popular as anytime in it before. Firstly,the rural area has a better environment.As everyone knows that ,the forest like people's lung which can dilute the poisoner substance from polluted air.So,in rural area,the large scale of forest can play an important role to provide fresh air to people who live there. But in city or other area which is living around a lot of people,they will not have access to fresh air and a clean environment because of the pollution they produced. Secondly,in the aspect of traffic ,people who live in rural area will not feel uncomfortable which spawned by traffic jam.But in cities,people will not ignore the problem that a heavy traffic will spend people's a lot of valuable time.And thus also can conduct an adverse influence on people's motion.And people live there will always feel plight and nervous. The last but not least is that people will have a more active thinking in a quiet place rather than a stressful environment.So,people who living in rural place will work more efficiently.But in city,people have to keep a fast pace to accomplish a lot of boring tasks. So,in conclude,I agree that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.